Seven Banners

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Seven banners stood in the earth, spaced with care.

The Argalin eagle screamed. It was a short, ruined sound, cut off almost as soon as it left the bird’s throat. The Argalin speaker drew the eagle closer to their chest as the sound echoed across the circle and then died.

The bird did not struggle. Its wings were folded tight, talons wrapped and stilled. Where its eyes should have been, pale clouding caught the light and gave nothing back.

The banners marked the circle unevenly, placed for obligation rather than display. Bayakhun filled the outer ring in numbers that read as weight, and Ramdur stood where they always did, steady and unspeaking. The Korshun were present but quiet, their work already finished.

The Proven stood inside the ring, hands empty.

“Altan,” one of the elders said at last. “Say what was seen.”

The Argalin speaker inclined their head. “A pillar,” they said. “Fire. Golden-white. Far to the west, along the Spine.”

“How far?” someone asked.

“Far enough that the cloud took the color before the ground did,” the speaker replied. “Brief enough that anyone who looked away missed it.”

They loosened their hold slightly, letting the blinded eagle be seen.

“The birds turned before the light reached its height,” the speaker continued. “They scattered as if something below had struck upward.”

The Ossrajin rose next.

“There are no bones,” their speaker said.

They knelt and placed a funerary token on the ground between the banners, clean and unmarked, meant to be named later.

“Varosk,” they added, after a moment. “Capital of the Zakhar Republic. Whatever happened there did not leave itself behind. There is nothing to read. Nothing to place.”

The token remained where it lay. Empty. Murmurs had already started.

One of the Shavultai approached without hurry. They set a pair of forge tongs beside the token, laid open, gripping nothing.

“You do not strike metal that has not cooled,” the Shavultai speaker said. “Land answers violence in its own time. Whatever erased that city has not finished speaking.”

“And if it speaks again?” a Volkhai voice asked.

The Volkhai speaker strode forward before an answer could form. They laid an axe on the ground, haft worn smooth by use, edge clean.

“We must answer first,” they said. “Bayani died under foreign roofs. Distance did not spare them. Waiting will not either.”

Now, silence tightened around the three objects.

“Choose,” the Volkhai speaker said, turning to the Proven.

The challenge was recognized. The circle shifted, expecting the familiar shape of it.

The Proven looked upon each object without moving.

After an eternity bound in a moment, they crossed the ring and set their hands to Volkhai’s banner first, drawing it free from the earth. The cloth stirred once and settled.

Each banner came next. Shavultai. Argalin. The Korshun’s banner. The Ramdur’s. The Bayakhun’s own, taken without emphasis. The weight accumulated.

Only one banner remained.

The Ossrajin banner stood pale against the ground. The Proven stopped before it, breath steady. If this banner was taken, nothing would remain unheld.

They lifted it, and it came free easily. Too easily.

The banners settled together in the Proven’s arms, balanced and complete, and the wrongness of it rippled through the circle. The blinded eagle shifted once and turned its ruined gaze away from the sky, toward the Proven instead.

No one spoke.

It was no longer a challenge of answers.

Seven banners lay in their arms, held with care.

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Feb 16, 2026 12:39

I really loved the way you used Mummer’s Hat imagery to build such a haunting yet whimsical atmosphere, it made the whole scene feel alive and cinematic. The contrast between the folklore and the character’s internal thoughts was super compelling. I’m curious, what inspired you to blend that eerie vibe with such a playful tone?

Feb 16, 2026 19:53

Thank you for reading and commenting! I can't say that I set out intentionally to blend tones, but I try to write these shorts so that the world feels lived in. I think the contrast feels true to how folks actually experience serious moments. There's weight, sometimes obvious weight, but there's the texture to living inside it, too.

Feb 18, 2026 08:02

I really love that perspective actually “the texture to living inside it” is such a good way to put it. That balance definitely made the scene feel more real instead of overly dramatic. Do you find writing shorts helps you capture those lived-in moments more easily? And btw do you have any other social coz I would love to chat more with you if you don't mind?

Feb 18, 2026 18:59

Definitely! The Foundry world wiki can be a little dense, even with some recent attempts to make it reader-forward, so going down to the ground level in short stories has been really helpful in showing, rather than just telling. I'm pretty much only posting / active here on WA, but I have the same Discord name as here (Mummerset) if you had more questions, whatever's easiest!

Feb 19, 2026 07:15

Ahh I see, btw I added you on discord. With the same name.

Feb 17, 2026 18:19

Omg I just have to say this I’m genuinely in love with your writing style. It flows so beautifully and the way you build emotions and tension is just chef’s kiss. Every chapter leaves me wanting more, and I’m honestly so excited to see where you take the story next. If you’re comfortable with it, would you maybe be open to connecting on Discord or Instagram? I’d really love to chat more about your upcoming chapters and hear your thoughts about the story. No pressure at all of course I just really admire your work and would love to stay connected

Feb 17, 2026 20:05

Hey there, and thank you for reading and commenting! I greatly appreciate it! I'm present on Discord with the same username (Mummerset) if you're inclined to reach out.

Feb 18, 2026 13:27

I've sent you a request. it will be from Elowen